Paragraph Analysis 2

Paragraph Analysis 2

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In this blog post I will be posting a copy of my draft in which I analyze the paragraphs in my draft. I will also be reflecting on how this activity helped me look at the strengths and weaknesses of my draft.

After doing this activity I found some very strong point in my essay but also some points that could use improvement. I found my introduction to be very strong in introducing the topic of my article and the topic of my essay. Also each one of paragraphs develops upon the main idea of the essay. An area I need to improve in is that I need to add direct quotes to my second and third paragraphs to give my audience examples from the text.

Paragraph Analysis 2