Overall, looking at my paragraphs I thought I did very well on the focusing and developing my main point. In every single paragraph where it would be necessary I developed upon the moan idea. An area I could see myself improving is the use of transitions. Well I thought my sentences flowed well most of the time, I think there is till room for improvement. Transitions are very useful in improving sentence flow. I think that while there is a lot I need to add, what I have so far is pretty strong.
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