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What was specially revised from one draft to another?
My entire project changed as I lacked original content and insight on my debate. In the end, I evaluated the use of social media by Bud Light versus in the beginning when I gave reasons why social media was good for social media.
How did you reconsider your thesis or organization?
My whole project changed so these both changed.
What lead you to these changes?
I made this change because I lacked the original content and by changing my project I was able to make my project "mine".
How do these changes affect your creditability as an author?
I think that these changes made me more creditable because I was just giving my opinion, I am also creditable because I am a business student so I am earning about advertising and other business ideas.
How did you reconsider sentence structure and style?
My sentence structure remained similar but my style got a little more informal. I was using more opinion versus actually statistics so I felt I could be a little more informal.
How did these changes assist your audience in understanding your purpose?
I felt my purpose was made much clearer. The purpose of my project was to evaluate the use of social media by Bud Light and I felt it is now easy for the audience to understand that.
Did you have to reconsider the conventions of the particular genre in which you are writing?
The changed the genre of my project but it was fairly similar so I could write in a similar way. The only change I noticed was that I included a creditability piece for myself at the end of my work.
How does the process of reflection help you reconsider your identity as a writer?
I have never completely changed a project before so that was something new for me. I like to keep the majority of my ideas through the revision process but I completely changed my project. I feel this shows my improvement in my confidence as a writer to be able to completely throw away one idea and go in a completely different direction.
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